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Firas - see my edited versions below!

Tony,
Regarding the writing task given of short paragraphs in various situation, please find the sequenced respond as follows:

1- Dear neighbour

Iam writing to inform you that my baby, who sleeps in the next room, keeps awak every night due to the high tone emissioned from your stereo. Due to the above passage said, Iam unable to sleep well also, because I have to look after my baby which gives me a very brief time to sleep. Kindly asking you to turn the stereo off in order to get over all the problems caused by this machine.

Yours sincerely
Firas

2- Dear Aunt

In line with your birthday and the cermoney you had into your house regarding the same, please accept my apology that I did attend to this party,neighter brought a present for you. The reason behind my absence was that my instructor in the Ielets course that Iam currently involved in, has given me a lot of homework which kept me at home all the time. I hope that you will consider the reason behind my absence and ultimately forgive me.

Yours sincerly
Firas

3- Dear Alex

Iam writing this letter in order to thank you for lending me your camera. I consider this as a generous sense from your side. I promise you, that I would return it back as soon I finish taking the necessary picture whaih are required ti illustrate the work progress in the site.

Thanks and Regards
Firas

4- Dear Sister

Iam writing to you in order to remind you about my graduation party of date 25th February 2007. As you can see from the date mentioned, that the party supposed to be held next month. This will give you a vast time to organise yourself, and enhance the difficult circumstances, that might prevent you of attending this party. I would really like to see you there and meet my classmates, whom I worked with them, during the study course.

I hope you can settle this matter to my satisfaction and show yourself in there.

Yours sincerely
Firas

5- Dear Sir

Iam writing to complain regarding the charging fees Iam asked to pay, eventhough I have not renewed my membership in the club. I have been receiving receipts since the last three months, although I have informed the club officially about my intension of not visiting the club again.'please see my letter reference number CLUB/MEM.CANCEL/1 dated of 25 April 2007'.
I trust that you will gve this matter your urgent attantion and stop sending me any further letters relavant to the club's membership renewel.

Yours faithfully
Firas

6- Dear Sir

Iam contacting you regarding, your products' advertisement; illustratd on your factory web site page in the inetrnet; which I found satisfactory to the demands of my job. I would be grateful if you could forward to me a catalogue relevant to the above said products as soon as possible with a price number alloted for each item, as shown in web page.

I hope you can settle this matter to my satisfaction.

Yours faithfully

Firas

7- Dear Tony,

Iam writting to you regarding the education improvement that happened to my son after attending your vocational classes. In this regatrd, I would like to exopress my deep thankfull and vast grateful of helping him in addition of preparing him to the Ielets exam. After attending your classes, my son have became elegible and qualified to conduct the above said exam.

Thanks and Regards.

Yours sincerely

Firas.

NOTE: PLEASE COMMENT ON THE FORM,SHAPE ,PUNCTUATION AS WELL AS SPELLING OF THE ABOVE AT YOUR SATISFACTION.

1- Dear neighbour

I am writing to inform you that my baby, who sleeps in the next room, is kept awake every night due to the loud noise from your stereo. Due to this racket , I also am unable to sleep well. I ask you to turn the stereo off in order to avoid these problems or I shall inform the police concerning your unreasonable behaviour.

Yours sincerely
Firas

2- Dear Aunt

About your birthday party that you had into your house, I am so sorry that I couldn't attend. Please forgive for this and that I forgot to bring you a present. I was absent because my IELTS tutor has given me a lot of homework which kept me at home all the time. I do apologise and will come to see you next saturday - I promise!

Your nephew

Firas

3- Dear Alex

Iam writing this letter in order to thank you for lending me your camera. I consider this as a really generous gesture. I promise you that I will return it as soon I finish taking the necessary pictures which I need to illustrate the work progress on site.

Thanks and regards
Firas

4- Dear Sister

Iam writing to you in order to remind you about my graduation party on 25th May 2007. As you can see from the date mentioned, that the party will be held next month. This will give you plenty of time to organise yourself in case you might have difficulty in attending this party. I would really like to see you there and meet my classmates that I worked with during the course.

SEE YOU THERE!

Love

Firas

5- Dear Sir

I am writing to complain regarding the fees I have been asked to pay, even though I have not renewed my membership in your club. I have been receiving reminders for the last three months, although I have informed the club officially about my intention of not rejoining the club. Please see my letter reference number CLUB/MEM.CANCEL/1 dated of 25 April 2007.

I trust that you will give this matter your urgent attention and stop sending me any further letters regarding the club's membership renewal.

Yours faithfully

Firas

6- Dear Sir

Iam contacting you regarding your electronics (?) products' advertisement illustrated on your factory web site page on the Internet which I found useful for my job. I would be grateful if you could forward to me a catalogue relevant to the above products as soon as possible with a price number alloted for each item, as shown in web page.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

Firas

7- Dear Tony,

Iam writing to you regarding the education improvement that my son gained after attending your vocational classes. In this regard, I would like to express my deep thanks and vast gratitude to you for helping him in addition of preparing him to the IELTS exam. After going to your classes, my son have became elegible and qualified to conduct this particular exam.

Best regards

Firas

Bravo Firas! Well done for taking the time and trouble to post this work!